After completing the first rough cut of my trailer I felt it was necessary to get feedback from my peers as soon as possible. Therefore, in one of our lessons everyone gathered round to watch it (including my teacher).
The feedback I received was positive although there were some criticisms. These were:
- The long shot of the clock that is shown at multiple times in the film should show different times in the day (e.g. 7am, 12pm). This would give a better impression of time going by and therefore link to the film more effectively instead of just having the same time shown as the trailer progresses.
- My teacher felt the continuity was poor at 0:39 when Emily goes to sit down. This will be taken into consideration and I will slightly length or cut one of the shot to improve this match-on-action.
- There needs to be more shots of the records (the vinyl) at the start cause otherwise the shot at 0:19 just seems quite random. There was a couple of other shots of Emily with the records that I filmed with the intention of putting in but I forgot to so in my 2nd rough cut I will make sure I definitely do.
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